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Edits:

#Nov. 1st entry has a minor edit; added 'Part 1 (Tower):' to it, to fit into the sectioning schema I am using.

#Nov. 6th entry has some minor edits for making sense (caused by incomplete edits of a paragraph) and weather consistency with Nov. 7th entry.

#Nov. 7th entry edited for facts.

Notes:

+I want to majorly rewrite the bar fight scene when the time for editing comes. It was unplanned, and that's fine; I think it works out some foreshadowing, sets up some stuff I want to do, gets the villians on stage and uses the iconography of the characters. But it doesn't quite work as it is. Reynolds is way too ineffective, for one thing, and overall it just goes too smoothly. So, mental note, rewrite 2.6.

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